DBM U3 & U9: UNA TIERRA SIN GOKU

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HE
IS
DEAD

WHAT A
SURPRISE!

EARTH
-LINGS
WITH AROUND 200 UNITS.

YOU BETTER
STRIKE
TOGETHER

YOU
KILLED
CHIAOTZU, DIDN´T YOU!?
YOU BASTARD!

AH, WHAT A MORON.
YOU SHOULD´VE
LISTENED TO
MY ADVICE.

BUT, TO
BE
HONEST...

WITH ONLY
189 UNITS
YOU STOOD
NO CHANCE
AT ALL.

AND NOW THE CHUBBY OF 202..

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No!Not Bongo too!Don't you dare Chewys!

John Boredonquixote 09/16/2017 17:50:25

31
Author

This saiyans are mercyless

By the way i liked Bongo too... we might see him again in some flashback in Universe´s 9 story

Chewys 09/17/2017 01:45:23

i think the sentence "did you kill chiaozu bastard?" as "you killed chiaozu, you bastard"

venuu 09/16/2017 18:45:47

Yeah it might be better if phrased differently. I mean seeing as Bongo and Gerkin(?) are the only ones there and Bongo didn't do it, then it's kinda obvious that Gerkin did it. Maybe though it would be better to phrase it as "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you? You bastard!".

Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 09/17/2017 08:33:25

yeah that way the sentence would be better if added "didn't you" with it

venuu 09/17/2017 18:20:51

Chewys said:

Chewys you should probably change Tien's line where he ask Gerkin if he killed Chiaotzu to this: "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you!? You bastard!"

Maybe the way you worded it works better in Spanish, but in English it just sounds really awkward. I mean the way it's worded sounds like he doesn't know that Gerkin did it, but it's pretty obvious Gerkin did it and that Tien is just asking for confirmation.

Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 09/19/2017 07:42:34

31
Author

I understand. I'll change it as soon as i get to the PC

Chewys 09/19/2017 13:42:37

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