Oula ça sent mauvais ça comme situation, comment il va retourner la donne ?
Translate Djowi 05/01/2011 20:20:56Que raro esta pagina ahora no esta disponible aun que si la siguientes, en fin sigo ojeando cual Buho por la noche.
Translate Itram 06/14/2011 17:52:40Je n'ai pas trop aimé la case 1, pas top en lisibilité sur l'Amilova Bump les doigts de la main se mélangent avec le corps, (sur une lecture rapide bien sur).
Un autre cadrage aurait peut être été mieux, sa main et l'aura du pouvoir sortant de la case... ?
Umm. Quiero mi pagina que me devuelvan mi pagina!!!:bummed:
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Nice page but the first illustration is problematic for the general understanding of the action.
TroyB 05/03/2011 10:37:47I had to read the previous pages 3 times to understand this action.
I think the problem comes from the fact that his arm has no "move effect".
It gives the feeling that he is actually punching.
And with the weird glove with a ball shape, I thought that he was using some power... like a lazer artefact or "magic missile".
Well, something straight .
While if I understood well, he's waving his blade... and then realises that he does not have his blade in hand... right ?
Sorry JohanDark but I think it's a bit confusing .
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jajaja, thanks for your comment. It´s a bit confusing because in this part there a lot of things that i´m not explaining but yes showing them. That´s because i want really to confuse (Except for the fact that he is dangerous and in a confusing situation that he don´t really understand).
johandark 05/03/2011 11:02:22Yes he´s calling his sword from his arm, but it´s on the tree. (i have to confess that the draw of the tree was drawn 4 years ago, and those draws are a little confusing).
jajaj thanks for your comment it helps to see things that i´m not able to see for my own.
oh I'm surprised few comments there, héééééhooooo english readers don't belaaaazzyyyy and praise our super artist !!!
Leslie75 05/06/2011 12:18:50Author
jajaja... well i´m used to. That´s why i´m trying to write in French.. because there are more comments... but... pfff... it´s really complicated for me the french language xD
johandark 05/06/2011 16:47:54thanks for your suport
The factions in the first two panels are really amazing .
Ki11er 07/01/2011 21:05:39