DHALMUN: AGE OF SMOKE

Since the so called "superheroes" appeared, a lot has changed. There are no vigilantes. Just the military. The police. The better world.

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Dhalmun: Age of Smoke is a webcomic I started in September 2011, but it incorporates ideas I had and developed in various unfinished projects since maybe 2005.
It's originally written in Polish, but since I also have an English version, I uploaded this one, to make things easier.
Thanks for reading.

Dhalmun: Mythology: - http://dhalmunmythology.amilova.com/

Cartoonist : Biram Ba

Translator : Licarion Rock

Helper : fikiri

Original Language : English

Updated on : On hold

Genre : Action

Type : Comics - Saga
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URL : dhalmun-age-of-smoke.amilova.com

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28 Comments on the pages of Dhalmun: Age of Smoke

maso_miner 26Jul ch5 p14 First

Biram Ba 1May ch1 p9 :)

Eskhar 19Mar ch1 p9 That's too funny xD !

Busso 29Jun ch2 p10 yeah, i do a mistake with the comment. page 11th. Now it is okay thanks :D

Biram Ba 28Jun ch2 p10 I need a textbox here, otherwise i can't continue to traduce.. You mean on the 11th page? Should work now.

Busso 27Jun ch2 p10 I need a textbox here, otherwise i can't continue to traduce..

Biram Ba 20Mar ch2 p1 Important->It seems I fuc*ed something up with the order of pages in episode two. The last page and page five switched places. Mea (...)

Biram Ba 20Mar ch2 p14 YEP... I thought it was an english word... jeje sorry I´m from spain ^^ Well, the panels are fine, just the speech bubbles (...)

johandark 20Mar ch2 p14 Here the font is a bit small if we don't read in full screen... or is that an effect ? The comic was prepared for a 980px la (...)

Biram Ba 20Mar ch2 p14 Here the font is a bit small if we don't read in full screen... or is that an effect ? The comic was prepared for a 980px layo (...)

johandark 20Mar ch2 p14 Here the font is a bit small if we don't read in full screen... or is that an effect ? Yes... It is really hard to read it. (...)

Sool 20Mar ch2 p14 Here the font is a bit small if we don't read in full screen... or is that an effect ?

Biram Ba 17Mar ch2 p1 Wow, stunning illustration !!! Congrats Biram Ba! Thanks a lot! :)

TroyB 17Mar ch2 p1 Wow, stunning illustration !!! Congrats Biram Ba!

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28 comments in other languages.

Erazade 25Jun ch4 p6 Il manque les paroles de la 2eme case

Biram Ba 24May ch1 p13 Some day, I need to learn French.

drakoon 23May ch1 p13 wonder-woman fait de la pub maintenant!;)

drakoon 13May ch1 p2 c'est juste dommage que la police du texte ne colle pas du tout avec le dessin mais je pense pas qu'on peut la changer

madedd 24Feb ch3 p6 Superbe splash page!

madedd 24Feb ch3 p5 Chouette mise en scène très batmanienne^^

madedd 24Feb ch2 p16 J'adore le rendu graphique de la téléportation! C'est juste dommage que le texte soit si mal centré dans les bulles.

madedd 24Feb ch1 p2 Suspension d'incrédulité lié au genre comme la magie dans la fantasy, le pistolero qui descend 6 types sans prendre une balle, le (...)

Bellatrice 23Nov ch1 p2 Le costume empêche le gars d'être pris au sérieux. Comment font les auteurs de comics ?

cosplaygirl 6Apr ch1 p13 une parodie des histoires de super-héros avec une ambiance de polar... un mélange qui promet

sayes 6Apr ch1 p13 Bon début, super-héros + humour + filles sexy c'est tout ce que j'aime :)

Toyo 6Apr ch1 p9 hahaha la tête du mec dans la première case :D

fikiri 28Mar ch1 p8 Merci à Licarion Rock pour la traduction (je n'ai fait que corriger et éditer les bulles)

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TroyB New Topic! 13Mar All comics - Dhalmun: Age of Smoke - Everything's under control. Great work, we'll put the focus on your art in one of the coming newsletters so more readers can discover it :) !!! Troy

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