In this chapter I have tried to correct some of the mistakes of the first one, such as anathomy, perspectives, and, above all, the excess of screentones that sometimes made it hard to read. I hope you like it. ^-^
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Darius 10/10/2012 01:51:48In this chapter I have tried to correct some of the mistakes of the first one, such as anathomy, perspectives, and, above all, the excess of screentones that sometimes made it hard to read. I hope you like it. ^-^