Nice page but the first illustration is problematic for the general understanding of the action.
I had to read the previous pages 3 times to understand this action.
I think the problem comes from the fact that his arm has no "move effect".
It gives the feeling that he is actually punching.
And with the weird glove with a ball shape, I thought that he was using some power... like a lazer artefact or "magic missile".
Well, something straight .
While if I understood well, he's waving his blade... and then realises that he does not have his blade in hand... right ?
Sorry JohanDark but I think it's a bit confusing .
TroyB03/05/2011 10:37:47
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jajaja, thanks for your comment. It´s a bit confusing because in this part there a lot of things that i´m not explaining but yes showing them. That´s because i want really to confuse (Except for the fact that he is dangerous and in a confusing situation that he don´t really understand).
Yes he´s calling his sword from his arm, but it´s on the tree. (i have to confess that the draw of the tree was drawn 4 years ago, and those draws are a little confusing).
jajaj thanks for your comment it helps to see things that i´m not able to see for my own.
johandark03/05/2011 11:02:22
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oh I'm surprised few comments there, héééééhooooo english readers don't belaaaazzyyyy and praise our super artist !!!
Leslie7506/05/2011 12:18:50
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jajaja... well i´m used to. That´s why i´m trying to write in French.. because there are more comments... but... pfff... it´s really complicated for me the french language xD
thanks for your suport
johandark06/05/2011 16:47:54
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The factions in the first two panels are really amazing .
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Nice page but the first illustration is problematic for the general understanding of the action.
TroyB 03/05/2011 10:37:47I had to read the previous pages 3 times to understand this action.
I think the problem comes from the fact that his arm has no "move effect".
It gives the feeling that he is actually punching.
And with the weird glove with a ball shape, I thought that he was using some power... like a lazer artefact or "magic missile".
Well, something straight .
While if I understood well, he's waving his blade... and then realises that he does not have his blade in hand... right ?
Sorry JohanDark but I think it's a bit confusing .
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jajaja, thanks for your comment. It´s a bit confusing because in this part there a lot of things that i´m not explaining but yes showing them. That´s because i want really to confuse (Except for the fact that he is dangerous and in a confusing situation that he don´t really understand).
johandark 03/05/2011 11:02:22Yes he´s calling his sword from his arm, but it´s on the tree. (i have to confess that the draw of the tree was drawn 4 years ago, and those draws are a little confusing).
jajaj thanks for your comment it helps to see things that i´m not able to see for my own.
oh I'm surprised few comments there, héééééhooooo english readers don't belaaaazzyyyy and praise our super artist !!!
Leslie75 06/05/2011 12:18:50Autor
jajaja... well i´m used to. That´s why i´m trying to write in French.. because there are more comments... but... pfff... it´s really complicated for me the french language xD
johandark 06/05/2011 16:47:54thanks for your suport
The factions in the first two panels are really amazing .
Ki11er 01/07/2011 21:05:39