This is a beautiful oneshot. The drawings and those touches of innocent humor reminded me a lot of Ranma 1 / 2.
If I have to criticize something, it would be that sometimes I could not distinguish Momiji from the other Baseball players. The character design could have been a little more detailed.
But leaving that minor detail, I love this manga and continue translating it to Spanish so more peaple could read it.
And I will take a look to your other proyects.
Thanks for this nice history and all your hardwork. Cheers! Happy Christmas and New Year.
tai24/12/2011 05:16:36
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This is effin' amazing. The story is simple and all in all it's basically just a baseball game; one would think that it would be boring and repetitive, but you pulled off nice comedy that made me just want to see what was on the next pages.
Something I would like to point out that I found interesting is the contrast between those two and the fact that both Momiji and Koji play reversed roles; By this I mean to say that Momiji resembles a typical male character ( both physically and in terms attitude) and Koji the typical female character ( same aspects referred above).
Another thing I'd like to point out is the fact that everything is just too unexpected, which by my standards means that you're following a good path.
Keep it up and Happy Holidays!
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This is a beautiful oneshot. The drawings and those touches of innocent humor reminded me a lot of Ranma 1 / 2.
tai 24/12/2011 05:16:36If I have to criticize something, it would be that sometimes I could not distinguish Momiji from the other Baseball players. The character design could have been a little more detailed.
But leaving that minor detail, I love this manga and continue translating it to Spanish so more peaple could read it.
And I will take a look to your other proyects.
Thanks for this nice history and all your hardwork. Cheers! Happy Christmas and New Year.
This is effin' amazing. The story is simple and all in all it's basically just a baseball game; one would think that it would be boring and repetitive, but you pulled off nice comedy that made me just want to see what was on the next pages.
DayElf 26/12/2011 08:09:00Something I would like to point out that I found interesting is the contrast between those two and the fact that both Momiji and Koji play reversed roles; By this I mean to say that Momiji resembles a typical male character ( both physically and in terms attitude) and Koji the typical female character ( same aspects referred above).
Another thing I'd like to point out is the fact that everything is just too unexpected, which by my standards means that you're following a good path.
Keep it up and Happy Holidays!