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Auteur : Chewys
Équipe : This....IS MY BOOMSTICK, Demerzel, Gregoreo, bnkjk, JustWatchingManga
Traduction par : This....IS MY BOOMSTICK
Version originale: Español
Rythme de publication: Mardi, Samedi
Type : manga
Genre : Action
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English :
BDS / MANGAS | AUTEURS | COMMENTAIRES
Español :
BDS / MANGAS | AUTEURS | COMMENTAIRES
Français :
BDS / MANGAS | AUTEURS | COMMENTAIRES
日本語 :
BDS / MANGAS | AUTEURS | COMMENTAIRES
Русский :
BDS / MANGAS | AUTEURS | COMMENTAIRES
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I think you may have forgot some words.
Pixel-Platypus 16/03/2019 10:13:48All that's missing are those old-timey cards with the words on them and a catchy theme tune
Jason Phoenix 16/03/2019 15:58:34What hapend to the words?
HyperSonic_1985 16/03/2019 21:45:30Auteur
I´m sorry! The page wasn´t translated! I had some problems with that
Chewys 17/03/2019 00:55:25Adios? Didn't know Raditz could speak Spanish.
Pixel-Platypus 17/03/2019 02:46:32Auteur
I forgot to erase that balloon
Chewys 17/03/2019 02:49:40You might want to replace "scandal" with "noise' Scandal moreso refers to morally dubious activity.
Pixel-Platypus 17/03/2019 12:51:01A better fit would be "commotion".
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 17/03/2019 23:28:02Tien for the rescue!
John Boredonquixote 17/03/2019 14:22:18"Chewys" a dit:
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 17/03/2019 23:33:52Chewys "nowhere" should be "anywhere". Unlike most languages, double negatives a big no-no in English. Also as Pixel-Platypus pointed out, "scandal" doesn't really fit; "commotion" would work better. Also you could replace "Adios" with "farewell"; I think Raditz Saiyan that sarcastically would work.
Auteur
There!! Corrected.
Chewys 18/03/2019 12:24:56To correct the Adiós i have to erase it anf upload the page again. I'll do it later
Saved by the bell again, Yamcha! I bet Raditz's scouter is picking up Tien and Chiaotzu training in solitude. Hopefully Krillin and Master Roshi can help Yamcha intercept Raditz and intervene in making sure the former Crane School students from a premature trip to King Yemma!
Ultimate-Perfection 18/03/2019 02:43:30