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Pixel-Platypus 2

I think you may have forgot some words.

Pixel-Platypus 16/03/2019 10:13:48   
Jason Phoenix 11

All that's missing are those old-timey cards with the words on them and a catchy theme tune

Jason Phoenix 16/03/2019 15:58:34   
HyperSonic_1985 3

What hapend to the words?

HyperSonic_1985 16/03/2019 21:45:30   
Chewys 31
Auteur

I´m sorry! The page wasn´t translated! I had some problems with that

Chewys 17/03/2019 00:55:25   
Pixel-Platypus 2

Adios? Didn't know Raditz could speak Spanish.

Pixel-Platypus 17/03/2019 02:46:32   
Chewys 31
Auteur

I forgot to erase that balloon

Chewys 17/03/2019 02:49:40   
Pixel-Platypus 2

You might want to replace "scandal" with "noise' Scandal moreso refers to morally dubious activity.

Pixel-Platypus 17/03/2019 12:51:01   
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 12

A better fit would be "commotion".

Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 17/03/2019 23:28:02   
John Boredonquixote 10

Tien for the rescue!

John Boredonquixote 17/03/2019 14:22:18   
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 12

"Chewys" a dit:

Chewys "nowhere" should be "anywhere". Unlike most languages, double negatives a big no-no in English. Also as Pixel-Platypus pointed out, "scandal" doesn't really fit; "commotion" would work better. Also you could replace "Adios" with "farewell"; I think Raditz Saiyan that sarcastically would work.

Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 17/03/2019 23:33:52   
Chewys 31
Auteur

There!! Corrected.
To correct the Adiós i have to erase it anf upload the page again. I'll do it later

Chewys 18/03/2019 12:24:56   
Ultimate-Perfection 11

Saved by the bell again, Yamcha! I bet Raditz's scouter is picking up Tien and Chiaotzu training in solitude. Hopefully Krillin and Master Roshi can help Yamcha intercept Raditz and intervene in making sure the former Crane School students from a premature trip to King Yemma!

Ultimate-Perfection 18/03/2019 02:43:30   
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