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lampton:

Most of the time, I don’t notice my mistakes until the page itself is uploaded onto the site. Some mistakes are so stupid, I need a lot of Jisuk’s help. I wanted to show some of the edits she did for me because they were clearly, clearly necessary.

Page 99

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Jisuk’s script:

BEN (pointing to the safety)

This is a standard .22 caliber. This button on the side, that’s the safety. When it’s red, safety’s off.

(cont)

Always treat a gun as if it’s loaded.

BEN (a little more seriously)

Rule Two. Never point the muzzle at something you aren’t willing to destroy.

FERRIS (raising an eyebrow)

I don’t have to fill out any forms?

Ben and Victor just look at each other like Ferris is an idiot.

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Jisuk’s Edit:

Look how lovingly both Victor and Ben accepts Ferris’ ignorance. I love it.

And then here’s my original page:

 

Page 65

Jisuk’s Edit:

This edit actually confused me for the longest time. When I first saw the page, I noticed Jisuk has deleted some blanket wrinkles I have drawn in there, and couldn’t quite understand why. I looked back and forth between the edited page and my original page for a while.

And then I had to gasp at what Ferris was gripping:

I’m can’t thank Jisuk enough for all her hard work. Thank you so much, you’re a savior.

Yuki stop trying to sneak dicks into Fishbones.