nice effective page, i love the light on the face of the character in the 3rd frame.
Esteryn09/23/2011 15:35:31
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Esteryn のコメント:nice effective page, i love the light on the face of the character in the 3rd frame.
Furo: thank you. This scene wasn't on the first version of our comic and it wasn't easy to be effective on only 5 pages.
Gald you appreciate this.
studio.takoyaki09/23/2011 18:26:01
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Esteryn09/25/2011 16:01:13
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First 6 pages corrected/improved by me, dear native english readers, please tell me if it's understandable and correct .
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nice effective page, i love the light on the face of the character in the 3rd frame.
Esteryn 09/23/2011 15:35:31著者
Esteryn のコメント:nice effective page, i love the light on the face of the character in the 3rd frame.
studio.takoyaki 09/23/2011 18:26:01Furo: thank you. This scene wasn't on the first version of our comic and it wasn't easy to be effective on only 5 pages.
Gald you appreciate this.
First 6 pages corrected/improved by me, dear native english readers, please tell me if it's understandable and correct .
TroyB 09/26/2011 15:36:36