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John Boredonquixote 10

No!Not Bongo too!Don't you dare Chewys!

John Boredonquixote 09/16/2017 17:50:25   
Chewys 31
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This saiyans are mercyless

By the way i liked Bongo too... we might see him again in some flashback in Universe´s 9 story

Chewys 09/17/2017 01:45:23   
venuu 19

i think the sentence "did you kill chiaozu bastard?" as "you killed chiaozu, you bastard"

venuu 09/16/2017 18:45:47   
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 12

Yeah it might be better if phrased differently. I mean seeing as Bongo and Gerkin(?) are the only ones there and Bongo didn't do it, then it's kinda obvious that Gerkin did it. Maybe though it would be better to phrase it as "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you? You bastard!".

Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 09/17/2017 08:33:25   
venuu 19

yeah that way the sentence would be better if added "didn't you" with it

venuu 09/17/2017 18:20:51   
Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 12

Chewys のコメント:

Chewys you should probably change Tien's line where he ask Gerkin if he killed Chiaotzu to this: "You killed Chiaotzu, didn't you!? You bastard!"

Maybe the way you worded it works better in Spanish, but in English it just sounds really awkward. I mean the way it's worded sounds like he doesn't know that Gerkin did it, but it's pretty obvious Gerkin did it and that Tien is just asking for confirmation.

Kor Daemonsbane Saiyajinkami 09/19/2017 07:42:34   
Chewys 31
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I understand. I'll change it as soon as i get to the PC

Chewys 09/19/2017 13:42:37   
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