著者 : Gogéta Jr, Salagir, TroyB
チーム : fikiri, Tomoko, Adamantine, Drawly, Robot Panda
翻訳 : TroyB
Original Language: Français
公開のペース: 日曜日
タイプ : 和風漫画
ジャンル : アクション
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2 innocents with no defense... and with a child??? really... how dare you?
Kati 05/09/2011 13:07:46Kati のコメント:2 innocents with no defense... and with a child??? really... how dare you?
Sool 05/09/2011 13:13:16Gogogo Daddy, punish them !
I think the two "innocents with no defense" are the cop and the protester.
Igniz 05/09/2011 14:51:33This looks like FATALITY!!!!!!
Lgrxxl 05/09/2011 14:51:49wow, her dad sure is amazing!
ceco1 05/09/2011 17:03:08Awesome dad is awesome also incoming Justice Pwn attack
Thegreatsaiyaman 05/10/2011 02:16:05ur dads awesome hes GOKU
PrinceVegetaSSJ4 11/07/2014 06:19:59I wonder why those protesters think Amilova's father is the leader of their 'enemies' for lack of a better word. I hope nothing happens to poor Amilova there... but then again, if memory serves me right, she has to survive this particular event.
gui19900221 05/10/2011 19:47:15Awesome illustration, very dynamic !!! Continue like that !
Sandy 05/11/2011 11:20:01For a doctor, he is pretty strong.
dragon 05/11/2011 14:24:19dragon のコメント:For a doctor, he is pretty strong.
ceco1 05/11/2011 14:34:54imagine the drugs he is taking
ceco1 のコメント: dragon のコメント:For a doctor, he is pretty strong.
Kor the Legendary Kami 05/12/2011 02:14:41imagine the drugs he is taking
That or he also has Superpowers just like we know that Amilova has. It is always a possibility that she inherited her powers genetically from one or both of her parents ya know.
Cool ! But when are realesed new pages ? I saw on other languages there a re more pages :-(
Hitsugaya 05/12/2011 08:44:37The artist skills are just amazing, really professional! By other way the Script is a little poor... I mean the first chapter is fine (typical... but after all good). The second chapter is... well... you can lose yourself there easily and lose the interest for the story). And third chapter is about a superhero, a perfect man and a greenpeace man... don´t know but... It could be better. It´s a pitty because the art of the comic is just great.
shicajacs 05/12/2011 17:22:57shicajacs のコメント:The artist skills are just amazing, really professional! By other way the Script is a little poor... I mean the first chapter is fine (typical... but after all good). The second chapter is... well... you can lose yourself there easily and lose the interest for the story). And third chapter is about a superhero, a perfect man and a greenpeace man... don´t know but... It could be better. It´s a pitty because the art of the comic is just great.
Kor the Legendary Kami 05/12/2011 21:00:52Shon: "Wow it sounds kinda negative the way you look at how good the comic is. I don't know about you, but I love this comic. I think it keeps getting better with each Chapter. Sure backstory can be boring for some, but it adds more to the story itself and well Chapter 2 was great. Chapter 2 had a good amount of action. As for you Saiyan how it could be better, well of course it can, but all things can be better. There is always room for improvement in everything. Nothings perfect and well I wouldn't want anything to be either because perfection means there is no room for improvement or bettering. Ya learn that from Bleach when Capt. Mayuri Kurotsuchi is Szayel. The best thing to be would be to be always near perfection, but never reaching it at least in my opinion because then there is always room for improvement."
well it´s just my opinion but i think that this comic is to topic, predictable, and linear... There´s no surprises or story that catch you apart from the really beginning. The second chapter is really bad in my opinion with the ultra secret agent... i mean.. we all know this kind of topic agents with a lot of money and power... is just typical. I don´t know, the beginning seems to be a good story with an innocent girl in love for a boy and with hidden powers... but it´s not easy do a good story. Ei! it´s not bad! but with the artist like gogeta jr. it could be better. Just this. (for example Hemispheres, is just great! yeah probaly because is more humor and magical things and is more imaginative, but it surprise you more and it moves on topics but with a good point in all of them) With amilova it doesn´t happen. But as I said.. the art is great, and is made by a form that catchs you for the draws and flow of pages... but not for the story. and it´s a pitty. (ei... it´s my opinion. jeje).
shicajacs 05/12/2011 21:19:10wow, hes probably just gonna pull a whip out of the sky and tell em all to screw off.
derp 05/17/2011 04:56:47著者
Text on this page fixed, sorry it had issues, don't hesitate to comment when you see a problem and I'll solve it .
TroyB 09/23/2011 16:55:43It's like they don't notice the little girl sitting there.
TheDifferenceBetweenRightandRight 03/19/2013 16:12:58