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Yet another example of my pages being a little too wordy for their own good. Oh well.

I still like Yumi's little speech at the bottom of the page. I like how it came out. I hope it sounds honest and genuine. I think it does, but then again, I don't agree with a word of it.

Riff 13 06/15/2012 04:04:10

You are doing great with the "wordiness". It fully goes into a topic of discussion between Mac and Yumi. It gives a the story more depth. So far, I like this and I hope you'll continue making more pages.

Pat 07/11/2012 04:19:51

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Thanks. Actually my biggest problem with the wordiness and what I was complaining about was fitting it in the panel with the art. But really that's as much an art/design problem as wordiness.

Riff 13 07/14/2012 01:58:09

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