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Drawly のコメント:Colour page uploaded, I hope you'll like it

Your Fire is amazing! The new Shadow style of the character is simple... but effective Nice Work!

what a temper ^.^ mind you, she is having a very bad day ! The effects are amazing, as Johan said before me !

panel 1 "ENOUGH ! Shut your mouth !"

panel 2 "How DARE you try manipulating me using my father's ideals !"

panel 3 "I won't let a scumbag like you say another thing about my Father !"

TroyB のコメント: Caine のコメント:panel 1 "ENOUGH ! Shut your mouth !"panel 2 "How DARE you try manipulating me using my father's ideals !"panel 3 "I won't let a scumbag like you say another thing about my Father !" Thanks Caine .I've seen the suggestion you did online and it's really good BUT you've put your text out of the box .Hey readers you can vote for bests translations here :Links are allowed in comments only for Team Members! for your support !
Do you mean it was to long for the box? Well. I edited it to be shorter, but i forgot to save it last night. Should be fixed now, should be exactly how it appears in my comment.

Also, at times the voting page doesnt load the text so you have to keep refreshing the page until it does. This might just be a problem for me, but just saying in case anyone else has that problem as well.

TroyB のコメント: Caine のコメント:Do you mean it was to long for the box? Well. I edited it to be shorter, but i forgot to save it last night. Should be fixed now, should be exactly how it appears in my comment.Yep was too long for the box . I'll check your version monday . Caine のコメント:Also, at times the voting page doesnt load the text so you have to keep refreshing the page until it does. This might just be a problem for me, but just saying in case anyone else has that problem as well. What browser are you using ? er... Internet Explorer, would firefox be better for this site?

i see the more she gets angry the more her fires become stronger right?

incoming fire attack
will it be
A.falcon punch
B.Shoryuken
C.Hadoken
D.Kamehameha
or E. an attack seemingly unrelated to any of these but very similar to C and D

I think instead of dirt; the word trash or better yet "vilify" would work better.

on another note the art has improved. I take it as the artists in question have gotten more familiar with drawing Amilova & Raul. She stands out more in panel 2 & 3.