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This starting to become repetitive. Probably the last time at least.
Translate Jason Phoenix 05/30/2019 17:04:49
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Yep, this chapter has been all about Raditz gaining the upper hand the warriors ass-pulling something to keep up, while draining out. They are pretty much over the limit by now.
I'll try next chapter to avoid such a resource. It's just i wanted everyone to get a swing at Raditz 
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Repetitive would be if it was the same character over and over. I believe showing the Z Team taking it's swings in the ways we always wanted to see (instead of all just being weaklings waiting on Goku) is VERY interesting. Particularly showcasing everyone's special moves that get forgotten in Z due to low power levels.
I do not believe anyone would have complained if we were reading it in full form, it is only the waiting for pages that puts people on that negative edge imo.
I loved Gohan's skill equating to letting him fight above his power level, much like Roshi in Super's Tournament of Power.
Thanks for such an awesome story keep it up!
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Yep, that's also true. Having to wait for the pages makes any repeated resource too much! But, those are the rules and i have to play by them.
Since Tien trying to solo Raditz after Chiaotzu got murdered i've been having the feeling the battle was getting in a loop: Raditz about to kill, then something happens, Raditz gets pushed back, then again Raditz about to kill and so on... it's been 4 times already. I guess it's enough.
I needed to present a scenario where everybody could show all of their potential in order to make a stand against someone as superior as Raditz... Yamcha and Tien have gone way above their limits (specially Tien) and are making their last stand now. Raditz has much more reserve, but he too is taking a toll.
For example, even thought Grampa Gohan moves really well, Raditz wouldn't have missed that kick when he was 100% fresh.
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Oh yeah I definitely understand the schedule of a free webcomic. It doesn't bother me at all.
And I really believe that if Toriyama had written this fight it would have gone very similarly as well. Think of how they repeatedly tried and failed against Nappa too. The stakes get higher and higher as the loop goes until people died or something strong enough to stop him landed (in that case Goku).
I think your story is spot on and interesting. And good poing on Raditz being worn down. His own power level would probably read much lower right now than the 1200 we are used to after such a fight and expenditure of energy.
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I honestly don't mind these long chapters. It feels like the original DBZ manga with full fights intact, and not like the DBM Specials that normally shorten them. This is supposed to be a faithful recreation of Universe 9 in a manga format. It's going well so far! You stay true to both Toriyama and Salagir, yet give your own unique twist on the source material 
Anyway, I agree with everyone getting a fair shot at Raditz. Even with the Earthlings being nearly twice as strong as they were at this point in DBZ, they still are less than or equal to Goku and Piccolo. And even when they teamed up, Goku and Piccolo struggled immensely and couldn't even touch Raditz despite using their fully charged techniques.
The only times they got the upper hand on him was when Goku grabbed Raditz's tail because he personally knew about the Saiyan's tail being their weakness. The Humans in Universe 9 don't know that yet, so they are having a much tougher time. Not only that, but there is no Gohan (the half-Saiyan son of Goku) to get angry and inflict enough damage to Raditz and stun him long enough for Goku to hold his brother down and for to Piccolo kill them both with a Makankosappo. It will take the combined might of everyone to defeat him in Universe 9!
I think the battles with Nappa and Vegeta will be even more interesting, since either Tien or Krillin will train with King Kai and be on a more level playing field with the elite Saiyans since they will have Kaio-ken.
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Décidément il y a du monde ! C'est beaucoup moins facile pour Raditz, ce coup-ci, en tout cas il a plus de temps d'apparition.
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Je ne parle pas trés bien le francais... je ne te comprends bien. Qu'est ce "il y a du monde"? Et "ce coup-ci"?
Translate Chewys 05/31/2019 12:48:05
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" il y a du monde" parce que son radar s'affole. Et "cette fois-ci" parce que dans la timeline originale, Raditz ne dure pas si longtemps.
Translate DEMauritius 05/31/2019 13:08:24
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J'avoue, c'est un trait commun chez pas mal de nos personnages... ^^
Renkei Fuwarito 02/23/2017 19:24:19Bon toi tu seras nezumi 1, toi nezumi 2, etc...
Sandymoon 02/24/2017 14:54:44Автор
C'est sûr que c'est pas très pratique pour les noms des persos ^^
Renkei Fuwarito 02/26/2017 15:03:17T'inquiètes moi aussi j'suis paumée xD
Vanou Titiyou 02/26/2017 01:58:41Автор
Pour le moment c'est le but ! ^^ J'espère que tu appréciera l'histoire quand même !
Renkei Fuwarito 02/26/2017 15:03:50Ah, ils ne savent pas qui il est.
Khordel 02/26/2017 16:00:57Ni qui ils sont...
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Mon dieu, le chibi disait vrai... une armée de Nezumi
Mais qui va faire le Reigû de l'histoire?
Bonne continuation
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Khordel сказал:Mais qui va faire le Reigû de l'histoire?
Renkei Fuwarito 02/26/2017 19:30:31Et bien imagine une armée de Nezumi équipés de trucs tranchants et sans aucun Reigû pour les superviser... l’angoisse > <
Renkei Fuwarito сказал:Et bien imagine une armée de Nezumi équipés de trucs tranchants et sans aucun Reigû pour les superviser... l’angoisse > <
Khordel 02/26/2017 19:40:09Ah, ok...
Pas de Reigû...
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Mon Dieu, protéger nous
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Et potentiellement un ou plusieurs Nezumi psychopathes tueurs cachés dans le groupe
Renkei Fuwarito 02/26/2017 23:21:53Renkei Fuwarito сказал:Et potentiellement un ou plusieurs Nezumi psychopathes tueurs cachés dans le groupe
Khordel 02/26/2017 23:24:16...
En fait, avouez: vous avez compris que vous tiriez du plaisir a faire souffrir vos personnages, donc là vous avez décidez de faire souffrir ceux de cette nouvelle histoire encore plus que ceux de votre première histoire, c'est ça?
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Faux ! On a toujours su qu'on aimait faire souffrir nos personnages, c'est jusque qu'avec le temps on est devenues un peu plus trash !
Renkei Fuwarito 02/26/2017 23:57:45... Plus sérieusement, on est vraiment plus dans un univers bisounours, vous allez en avoir un petit aperçu à la fin du chapitre 1, et ça devient pire après ! ^^
Renkei Fuwarito сказал:... Plus sérieusement, on est vraiment plus dans un univers bisounours, vous allez en avoir un petit aperçu à la fin du chapitre 1, et ça devient pire après ! ^^
Khordel 02/27/2017 00:03:22"Bisounours"?
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Vous parlez (je vouvoies, vu que je ne sais pas si vous répondez toutes les deux, ou pas) de l'univers Irisiens?
Avec les enfants exploités par les gangs?
Les "fous" incarcérés et vendus comme esclaves?
C'est bien de cet univers que vous parler, là?
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Oui oui, c'est bien de celui-là ! ^^ Celui où les héros se tombent dessus comme par hasard, où tout fini toujours par s'arranger, et ou personne ne meurt (sauf si un méchant très très méchant tue un autre méchant).
Renkei Fuwarito 02/27/2017 00:10:15Non, ici, va y avoir un peu de tripes par ci par là, et les "gentils" et les "méchants" devraient être un peu plus difficiles à identifier ! (déjà ils sont pas tous borgnes...)
ps : c'est Nazer qui répond, mais je pense pouvoir dire que Makino est d'accord avec moi
D'accord c'est le trou noir !
MaryRed 03/07/2017 21:32:31Автор
L'amnésie totale et générale ! Le truc qui aide bien à se sentir en sécurité quand il vient d'y avoir un mort !
Renkei Fuwarito 03/08/2017 12:03:13Le truc le plus bizarre c'est que personne sait ce qui sait passé
MaryRed 03/08/2017 13:07:14