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Yet another example of my pages being a little too wordy for their own good. Oh well.

I still like Yumi's little speech at the bottom of the page. I like how it came out. I hope it sounds honest and genuine. I think it does, but then again, I don't agree with a word of it.

Thanks. Actually my biggest problem with the wordiness and what I was complaining about was fitting it in the panel with the art. But really that's as much an art/design problem as wordiness.