マンガ・コミック・ ゲーム・コミュニティ！

Smiley

Hi there folks!
My name is Dante(people call me Smiley) and i have been gathering informations about comic books and storys.
Because of not being able to draw anything else beside DBZ-style-comics,i didn't tried contacting anyone from AMILOVA,someone who can allow me to upload my comic.
Besides that,i had to get used to drawing on a graphic tablet.
Today,with the help of JohanDark ,i've decided to write to you about my comic.
Spirit crisis is a story about demons,spirits and teenagers.
It takes place 10,000 years after the biggest battle of demons vs spirits.
Why do i keep saying demon and spirit? Is there any difference?
Yes there is,demons and spirits are entities without bodies that use people to manifest...
Demons use them(the people) to harm others,Spirits help them to fight demons back.
I hope you will enjoy this comic,i draw and my friend RASEN designes the chapter.
English is not my native language to please excuse me.
I look forward to hearing from you.

http://xevozzez.deviantart.com/gallery/33820114
or
www.spiritcrisis.webs.com
or
http://spiritcrisisacademy.smackjeeves.com/

Spirit crisis by Dante&Rasen.
Copyright Dante&Rasen©

(P.S! I would like to give ALL MY THANKS to Gogeta Jr..Since he started drawing DBM i have learned a lot of things, i learned how to draw ENVIRONMENTS,FACE DETAILS,FACE EXPRESSIONS,ACCTIONS,MUSCLES and many others! Thank you very much for everything you've helped me with . I love Hemispheres and DBM.May god bless you!)

編集者 Smiley (27 Nov, 2011 14:05:09)

TroyB

Administrator

Hello Smiley .

Welcome on Amilova.com, thanks for your presentation !!!

(P.S! I would like to give ALL MY THANKS to Gogeta Jr..Since he started drawing DBM i have learned a lot of things, i learned how to draw ENVIRONMENTS,FACE DETAILS,FACE EXPRESSIONS,ACCTIONS,MUSCLES and many others! Thank you very much for everything you've helped me with . I love Hemispheres and DBM.May god bless you!)

I told him and he is very happy that you appreciate so much his work .

Concerning your comic "Spirit Crisis". There are good things, we clearly see the potential, but you need to improve the overall quality before we can publish it on Amilova.
You have good ideas for storyboarding and point of views... word hard and I'm sure you'll do great .

Hope you'll understand and not hate us for that .

Welcome on board .

Troy

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♫ Tu veux publier ta BD sur Amilova ? Lis les instructions et envois moi un message privé .

Smiley

Thanks for the reply!
Thank you for complimenting our comic-book,we are glad to see that you appreciate it.
Thank you for sending Gogeta Jr. my comment,i am so happy about it.
I will keep drawing and improve my comic book i don't know if i can do a big improvement to it,as i am 17 years old and i learn to get into a Medical University but i will do my best .

It feels good to be on-board .

johandark

Moderator

Thanks for the reply!
Thank you for complimenting our comic-book,we are glad to see that you appreciate it.
Thank you for sending Gogeta Jr. my comment,i am so happy about it.
I will keep drawing and improve my comic book i don't know if i can do a big improvement to it,as i am 17 years old and i learn to get into a Medical University but i will do my best .

It feels good to be on-board .

Welll to be honest with you... when I was 17 years old I did not draw really well... So don´t think about it.. It all depends on how much you work, and your practice.

And if you go to a Medical University think about that the God of the Manga "Osamu Tezuk" studied Medicine in University and when he finished he did the most incredible comics in all the manga History, Like "Black Jack". And his draws were not so good as you can imagine... SO.. never say ever...

Good Luck! And thanks for your support on amilova!

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mysteries, ghosts, undead, horror, religion, blood, sex, and of course ... humor!---------- ARKHAM

Smiley

Thanks for the reply!
Thank you for complimenting our comic-book,we are glad to see that you appreciate it.
Thank you for sending Gogeta Jr. my comment,i am so happy about it.
I will keep drawing and improve my comic book i don't know if i can do a big improvement to it,as i am 17 years old and i learn to get into a Medical University but i will do my best .

It feels good to be on-board .

Welll to be honest with you... when I was 17 years old I did not draw really well... So don´t think about it.. It all depends on how much you work, and your practice.

And if you go to a Medical University think about that the God of the Manga "Osamu Tezuk" studied Medicine in University and when he finished he did the most incredible comics in all the manga History, Like "Black Jack". And his draws were not so good as you can imagine... SO.. never say ever...

http://withfriendship.com/images/h/3711 … -manga.jpg

Good Luck! And thanks for your support on amilova!

Heeeeeeeey thanks very much for the suport!
Thank you for bringing the world this beautiful comic of yours ,i love ARkham,seriously.
Thank you for supporting me and for all the things you helped me with .
I wish you all the best,and please,do continue to draw this incredible story of yours,good luck and i hope you WIN!

Smiley

Hey guys,would you mind having a peek over SPIRIT CRISIS ? I made some pages and i spend more time on them,i have spent most of my  time watching hemispheres and amilova,i dont know how gogeta jr does it(i mean,he is a pro,he has skill,he practiced,i am at the beggining) but he is a genius.
TroyB,would you mind telling me how gogeta jr works?

For example,i make pannels in Manga Studio 4,then i draw in Photoshop CS3 layer by layer...I draw on a3 pages at 1200 dpi...can you tell me what gogeta jr does?
I would like to know.Why? Because he makes HI-QUALITY pages and can draw a lot of body proportion in every panel,while i can't(well,recently i realized i can but anyway).
Btw,i work alone on this comic,i color,i draw,i everything so CRITICS ARE APPRECIATED!
Thank you for reading this!
HAPPY HOLLIDAYS btw.

johandark

Moderator

Heeeeeeeey thanks very much for the suport!
Thank you for bringing the world this beautiful comic of yours ,i love ARkham,seriously.
Thank you for supporting me and for all the things you helped me with .
I wish you all the best,and please,do continue to draw this incredible story of yours,good luck and i hope you WIN!

jeje Thank you very much Smiley!

I Will try to do my best It´s possible that in future I´ll do more pages for week

Now i´m starting to do the 6th chapter where there will be two characters that is possible that you recognize .

Btw,i work alone on this comic,i color,i draw,i everything so  CRITICS ARE APPRECIATED!
Thank you for reading this!
HAPPY HOLLIDAYS btw.

Give us the link to see these new pages are you talking about... But... Be carefull if you are asking Critics.. because the honesty sometimes can hurt really much if you are not prepared to receive that true...

I Just tell you that I lost some friends just for my honesty... so I try to don´t give never my true opinion about things xD... because I just love to tell the same thing as I would love to hear from my work. ^^

Merry Christmas!

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mysteries, ghosts, undead, horror, religion, blood, sex, and of course ... humor!---------- ARKHAM

Smiley

Give us the link to see these new pages are you talking about... But... Be carefull if you are asking Critics.. because the honesty sometimes can hurt really much if you are not prepared to receive that true...

I Just tell you that I lost some friends just for my honesty... so I try to don´t give never my true opinion about things xD... because I just love to tell the same thing as I would love to hear from my work. ^^

Merry Christmas!

Merry Christmas to you too my friend!
Here is the link : http://xevozzez.deviantart.com/gallery/33820114
Don't worry about the critics,i can handle it,but just keep in mind that i am 17 and i am at the beginning .

Smiley

Hey guys!
Guess what!
I find a website where you can make your pictures look like a comic book so i decided to make mine.

What do you say!? Just click read,be careful that "2 pages mode" is selected and just press the arrow that points to the right.
Hope you enjoy!
http://issuu.com/xevozzez/docs/ch1-2

編集者 Smiley (29 Dec, 2011 21:48:10)

Champion

This is really a great comic. It has improved so much from the first chpater. I think that now it can be published in Amilova. The story is interesting and your drawing skills are getting better with each new page. I can't wait to see more of your future work. Good luck with Spirit Crisis.

Smiley

This is really a great comic. It has improved so much from the first chpater. I think that now it can be published in Amilova. The story is interesting and your drawing skills are getting better with each new page. I can't wait to see more of your future work. Good luck with Spirit Crisis.

Hey! Thanks very much!
i'm glad people think like that about Spirit Crisis!
I would like to be post here but this is not our decision,although i hope that they would reconsider our decision,based on the latest pages i made.
Thank you very much anyway!

編集者 Smiley (30 Dec, 2011 15:15:02)

sunpath

I also agree with Champion that you improved a lot from the first chapter. you draw interesting points of view and your panels are dynamic. for 17 years old who just started this is amazing way of telling a story. I can tell that you are spending time improving your skills but focus a little bit more on girl's anatomy. Your female character is like a man with feminine face. i understand that she should be strong but don' you think that also she should be more appealing?
one more thing: have you noticed in the movies how the camera is not crossing a specific line when there is a dialogue or two parties standing against each other? when telling a story in pictures is the same. be aware not to cross that line because it confuses the reader were in the area are located the characters.
if i am not very clear in my explanation write me on pm I'll try to explain more

Smiley

I also agree with Champion that you improved a lot from the first chapter. you draw interesting points of view and your panels are dynamic. for 17 years old who just started this is amazing way of telling a story. I can tell that you are spending time improving your skills but focus a little bit more on girl's anatomy. Your female character is like a man with feminine face. i understand that she should be strong but don' you think that also she should be more appealing?
one more thing: have you noticed in the movies how the camera is not crossing a specific line when there is a dialogue or two parties standing against each other? when telling a story in pictures is the same. be aware not to cross that line because it confuses the reader were in the area are located the characters.
if i am not very clear in my explanation write me on pm I'll try to explain more

Oh my god i feel like i'm in heavens.I would never had thought that my work would be apreciated.Thank you very much!You make me feel great! Make me want to work even harder!
I am trying to work on female anatomy,i am watching Amilova,Hemispheres and Dragonball Multiverse,i am trying to make her look ok,but i just can't,it's my first time i draw a girl.
Thank you anyway,i will do my best from now on.
I will send you a pm now.